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I'd Like To Rhyme Today... by ~jynxypanda:iconjynxypanda:



I'd like to rhyme today I thought so why not go for it
It never seems to falter even if no one would give a sh*t
I can't believe I used an expletive for the very first time
In a frigging poem, I hope it's not a crime
But kidding aside I'd really like to share a feeling or two
To you Pdee [insert gadget's name here] or someone who'd care to read like you
I see that reading Tumblr has some good and bad effects
Like how much I'd love to read that tale about some chick
Who fell in love with one she so wanted to hate
How no matter how much she tried, she couldn't compensate
But instead she fell under his dark gray eyes
And succumbed to his delight
It was sweet and it hurt like some blast end skrewt
Now I feel like I can understand
How badly she so wanted to forget such a man
Feeling confused and all and I might just need a scan
Somewhere in the four chambers of my heart, something that ran
I want to hide and not feel this great big ache
I don't even understand if this is what they call fate
So here I am left to rhyme with this electronic gadget
Nothing more to do but to sleep and flunk it
Okay I'm kidding I don't want to flunk it
But I really want to know if I'm just a lonely girl
Who'll never see the man who will soon love her
I'm just sixteen, give me a break
So please brain don't start with the dreams that you make
Foolish and deceiving they are
For they paint a picture that would never go as far
As to become a masterpiece and something that is real
It's just a dream after all, it's not the real deal
Anyway I'm beating about the bush
I just can't address the problem that I want to push
It out of my mind so I just want to say
I will sing what Megara did back in the day
I'm not in love I'm really not
He doesn't notice anyway
And what's the difference between me and that chick I talked about
Despite it being a movie they really had something going around
So I guess I'd just wait
Like some frigging sleeping beauty except I'm no beauty
What a pity little snow white, you'd have to ride the steed yourself
So tally ho and watch on for this tall tale
I can't wait to see the ending
Actually no, I really want to see the beginning
To see where I went wrong
So I end this simple rhyme with just one simple wish
I hope I'm better now at typing swish swish
And add probably another wish
I wish I'd finally stop it....
©2009 ~jynxypanda
:iconjynxypanda:

Author's Comments

Okay, what inspired me to write this one? Well a lot of heartbroken and lonely girls actually. Especially hearing stories about some friends and their friends and about this.

The tone here is very casual, very teenager if I must say so I've inputted the age of the persona as sixteen, the age when everything starts I'd like to say. When you started "feeling" maybe. And plus for some reason most anime girls are 16. XD or even younger! So there, can you relate with it?

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